What two strength did you see?
The first thing i liked is how you had written about the Willis H. O’Brien, you used to much words to write about this artist, the second thing i liked how you described about the models he did, and how you put the names of the silent animation in your project.
One way to improve?
You have a lot of writing on your blog, but you need to write some more words about the project on 23rd January when we was tried to create something from the lego and then draw the story.
What do you think of the work so far to-date?
On this project you was working just for few weeks so i think so that the work gone really far but you need to put more posts.